First Page Feedback
The first page of your book can determine if a reader will continue to read your book or not. Much like the way a book’s cover draws the reader in, the first page is just as important!
I can help you create an invigorating hook and sculpt an opening ready to draw your reader in. This feedback will focus on your opening’s impact, images, and presentation. Let’s convert passive writing to active moments and set your book up for success.
The first page of your book can determine if a reader will continue to read your book or not. Much like the way a book’s cover draws the reader in, the first page is just as important!
I can help you create an invigorating hook and sculpt an opening ready to draw your reader in. This feedback will focus on your opening’s impact, images, and presentation. Let’s convert passive writing to active moments and set your book up for success.
The first page of your book can determine if a reader will continue to read your book or not. Much like the way a book’s cover draws the reader in, the first page is just as important!
I can help you create an invigorating hook and sculpt an opening ready to draw your reader in. This feedback will focus on your opening’s impact, images, and presentation. Let’s convert passive writing to active moments and set your book up for success.
This feedback will focus on a mix of the big ideas in your first page (i.e. establishing the scene, characterization, tension, plot, voice, flow…) and I will pay special sentence-level attention to your opening paragraph to make sure your hook is strong!
The Process:
This order is an email service and is NOT a physical product.
You will be asked to fill out a form when you make your order. Please copy and paste your first page’s text there.
Once the order is made, the client will receive an email confirming their purchase and notification of the dates in which their project will be worked on and completed. All orders will be completed within one week of ordering.
The client is welcome to ask for clarification on any points of feedback, but any additional questions or feedback can be ordered via my Q&A emails, or as a customized feedback, editing, or tutoring order.
All messages, answers, and order confirmations will be worked on and sent within the schedule of Monday through Friday, 8AM to 5PM EST/EDT. All orders placed over the weekend will be reviewed starting on the following Monday.
Rules:
Absolutely NO AI or PLAGERIZED work!
Please keep your messages clean, polite, and professional.
No bullying, hate messages, or rude behavior of any kind will be tolerated.
Any inappropriate or spam messages not related to writing will cancel your project with no refund.
Any stories, questions, or feedback related to mature/NSFW/ 18+ themes are only available for clients who are 18+ years of age. NO underage characters in 18+ content or themes.
Any orders going against my content rules as stated in Danni Lynn’s Terms of Service will be cancelled.
Anyone who breaks the above rules will have their project terminated with no refund.
By purchasing this product, you are agreeing to Danni Lynn’s Terms of Services and rules.
No refunds are available unless the client does not receive their answer within 1 week of ordering.
No more than 700 words (this should cover a first page that is double space, new times roman, 12 pt. font).
FAQs:
Q: What if I want to submit multiple pages for review?
A: If you have a larger order, you would like fulfilled, please visit my Editing Commissions page for more information.
Q: I don’t know if you can help me. Can I contact you first before I make an order?
A: Absolutely. You can send your questions to me via my contact page first.
Q: I work better chatting in person. How can you help me?
A: Let’s plan a call! I offer calls for tutoring, writing and editing assistance, and brainstorming. You can learn more about those services here.